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Artist Of Sorrow


Artist Of Sorrow


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PostSubject: Dusk Yugure [ Done.]   Dusk Yugure [ Done.] Icon_minitimeThu May 08, 2014 7:26 pm

~~~Shinigami~~~

Corrosion Is A Form Of Beauty

Name:Dusk Yugure(Twilight)

Alias:Crow Of Oblivion

Age:1000

Visual Age: 15

Gender: Male

Reiatsu Color: The Reiastu of Dusk is that of a pale grey once it has been flustered. Seeming to possess a light shine to it as well. This shine would throw most others off as it has been known to be a metallic sliver like color as well.

Affiliation: Rogue

Division:N/A

Rank: Captain Class

--------------------Persona--------------------

Appearance:
Although Dusk usually dislikes the clothes of this age he still has to wear what they do. Unlike others the male seems to hate most clothes he see's so he makes his own. From this idea he created his own line of outfits to wear. The one he usually wears while out, and about the ninja world is nothing spectacular at all. It includes a cloak in were a scarlet red shade on the outside. It's trims however were a light grey. The cloak were not suited for stealth, and so it included a reverse side in which were a light grey just like the trims of it. Each of the sleeves the cloak possessed hung downward about 4 inches past his waist. This added length concealed the boys hands, and arms for the most part. The cloak possessed no hood, but instead had a collar that resembled that of the Akatsuki cloaks collar. Printed across the cloaks surface were a number of sliver crescent moons, or in other words his clans Crests. underneath the cloak he wore a black shirt. The shirt had the image of the current strongest Espada on it. Just below Dusk wore a pair of black jeans. They were ripped ever so slightly over the knees, and a small hole graced a spot just above his left knee as well. A pair of white boots tied this outfit over all together.


The hair of Dusk were a light tinted grey shade, and had been combed forward into the form of a single bang that covered his L.eye. Each eye were a vivid emerald pigment that glew brightly compared to the boys attire. Being quite slim he possessed no real fat to his body, or muscle for that matter. So basically he could be compared to stick rather than a person. The boy had someone gained the tail of a scorpion. It retained a blackened pigment on it's tail as well. It's origins are unknown .

Personality:

How can one begin to describe the seed of madness? Well well that is nothing more a easy task coming to Dusk. Fore unlike those who have submitted to the madness of life he has not.Instead the male will remain locked away,and shy in all manners. Meaning that he rarely ever talks to anyone lacking the need to speak with anyone. The on going solitude the boy faces is really a good really. It caused very emotionally crippling state most ninja suffered from to flee from his mind. Instead he Acquired a new found blood lust, and enjoys to ramble on,and on. Eventually getting to things about his views of life. Initially becoming a more straight forward person at those times even going so far as to call his unconstitutional rambling holy as he will mention "The luck of a cat" many times. A phrase that he finds to be holy. This is his favorite phrase.It means that it's only by pure mercy that your still alive. Isn't that such a nice thing to say? Moving on to the love Dusk suffers from. Most of the time the male is fairly shy as you know, but when it comes to girls with a happy,or selfish personality comes along he tumbles.His mind seemingly becoming blank. Anything he wishes to say will not happen. Instead things of utter disappointed are mentioned, or nothing at all. This can, and will hinder him in most battles unless he happily decides to ignore the female at the present time. Usually he doesn't ,but does decide to focus on her mainly. Unlike other people who are fairly social to their gender Dusk is not. He finds other males repulsive, and useless. Really it is just him comparing all other males to that of his worthless father. After all the guy did attempt to murder him after he was born. So why on earth does he not just hate him? It's simple really. He finds that if one male can do it why not the others. So he dislikes the entire gender for clearly no reason. When around them he'll be silent, and most likely ignore every thing they say. Responding only when spoken to as well. Other wise missions are not filled conversation. Unless a female of some sorts is involved.

--------------------History--------------------

History:
Awoken in a world yet to be know. A boy left all alone on the streets of another world. With memory lost, and no where to turn what else could one do? Become life less? A mere shell of their former selves. Would you do such a thing? Be hollow for all eternity. A dead flower that she'd no light on what once was. That is exactly how Dusk felt once he arrived in the Soul Society. Yet he didn't need a formal section, or a reason for why he was there. He simply assumed himself to be nothing more than a soul. As if that were the truth though. The only thing in found in this new world was hatred,chaos, and despair. Fore on his arrival he found himself in one of the town's near Gotei. A hollow had begun it's attack up on the innocent population there. Although it were only one destruction were bound to happen.

Person after person had been slain during this time. Yet Dusk simply giggled at the acts of death. He didn't Cate for such things. Strangers meant nothing to him at all. Instead Dusk felt the need to examine the creatures he learned later on in life to be hollows. Beings that prayed on the living to survive. However even as a Soul repeat slayer the beast Dusk felt it to be wronged, and even tortured. The conclusion of the hollows being mere beasts had long passed him in only a fee seconds. Instead he was beauty in the death they caused. What they brought to the table he wanted for himself. So he decided to enter the place where Soul Repeats are trained. He wanted to stop the injustice they all inflicted on a daily basis. He had been raised on the premise that slaying hollows was a natural born duty. A job he wouldn't escape from.

For the time being Dusk allowed them to push him further, and further. Everyday he slaughtered more and more of what he held dear. Eventually he became an Lieutenant of the assassination force with out ever activating the advanced skills of his Zanpaktuo. It wasn't really suited for what he assumed to be stealth in some ways. Around this time Dusk had decided to develop a direct plan to help with his believe. Ever so often he'd sneak away from the place of protection, and hunt hollows alone. He studied each, and classified them on base intelligence. Those who showed the most were spared, and captured somehow. While the less fortunate perished. He attempted to train, and tame them by himself. It didn't wok however, and the many drugs he gave them caused each to grow in power greatly. Although the hollows did escape most killed each other leaving only single one Alive. It had devoured the remaining hollows, and pulled off it's mask. From there the creature terrorized the all in it's path. But in the end before to much damage had been caused it were slain. LaUren put the creature down. The creature that played so many. This gained him captain status.(Happened about 300 years after being a Lt.)


If only life in the Soul Society had been great for the one known as Dusk Yugure. Being a member of this ever so territorial force he believed that life itself had no meaning. From dying as a human to being a warrior of souls nothing changed. Only the ability to amuse himself had risen. While the rest of the Shigami were actually defending their land Dusk had been off somewhere dealing with his own demons. Those demons being hollows terrorizing the world as we know it. However he wasn't killing any if them. Instead Dusk had been capturing, and attempting to tame these creatures for his own benefit. His dream being that hollows were the key to survival. They were the link to all worlds. Others thought him to be a mad man fit for nothing else, but ideal dreams. Yet he made it passed most that doubted him. The rank of a captain given to him.

However this rank wouldn't remain valid for very long. Fore Dusk soon drew forth a tale of rebellion. A ambush on the now deceased King Of Espada. He did this ending in failure though. Yet Dusk wasn't killed. Instead the boy were sparred his life, and allowed to live. After all their attack on the Soul Society came soon after that. It was then, and there that the male learned of the cruel world. For the hollows he had captured were slaughtered before his eyes. Everything about the world being revealed at that very moment. His desire to rebel overcame him. The restriction of something dear had got to him. In the wake of the moment. Through the field of battle he struck down a number of comrades. Many being his friends, and others complete strangers.

All the while he decided to rampage the Espada struck down most Shigami. They possessed little forces, and annihilation was at hand. Yet the only thing to cease his rage had been the murder, or rather onslaught of the Espada king. This shock gave him ground to take note of beings stronger than he falling. For now Dusk had decided to believe his own thoughts. After the Espada had retreated so did he. Lost in the world of his own desire.


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Artist Of Sorrow


Artist Of Sorrow


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HSM : Untrained
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PostSubject: Re: Dusk Yugure [ Done.]   Dusk Yugure [ Done.] Icon_minitimeThu May 08, 2014 9:20 pm

Xo Done.
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PostSubject: Re: Dusk Yugure [ Done.]   Dusk Yugure [ Done.] Icon_minitimeSat May 10, 2014 8:17 am

Hello, I'm Gabriel, and I'll be looking over your character application. Let's get started.

First of all, the age. For somebody who is captain level, that age would need to change by at least a couple centuries.

The history needs to be lengthened a great deal, with a lot more detail in it. How was he raised in soul society, where was he raised, what happened before he entered the soul society. When and why did he enter, what squad was he in and how did he get through the ranks, what started the ambition for capturing hollows, etc.

I'll look over it after you take care of those things, look at some other shinigami's to get a jist of it if ya need too.
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Location : My insanity
Rank : Captain
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HSM : Untrained
Reiatsu : Untrained
Hakudo : Untrained

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PostSubject: Re: Dusk Yugure [ Done.]   Dusk Yugure [ Done.] Icon_minitimeMon May 12, 2014 7:51 pm

.-. If you need more information on how he was raised, or the Lt thing I'll be happy to add more.
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