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PostSubject: oנo dє ℓa ғℓor (DONE)   Fri Apr 18, 2014 3:55 pm



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Naмє
Ojo dє ℓa ғℓor (єyє oғ тнє ғℓowєr)

Rєprєsєnтaтιon
A вℓooмιnɢ ғℓowєr

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Pℓanт & ιℓℓusιon


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Appєarancє
Being very similar in construction of that of katana the Tantō is smaller in size.  Ayane's Tantō is only 9 inches long this also accounts for the 3 inch long handle.  Usually tucked up into her kimono sleeve the blade is rarely seen, if you do have the opportunity to see it the blades handle and sheath are both pure white.  Upon the sheath are golden painted roses designs.  This Tantō is very plain in the rest of its design except there is no guard on the blade.

тypє:
Tantō


Rєsurrєccιon


Rєℓєasє Pнrasє
ғℓor (вℓossoм)

Appєarancє

For the general appearance of her Resurreccion please refer to the image above.

Her sword though looking completely normal to the general eye is more complex then one would think.  The sword is a incubator of sorts that will generate pollen within, to feed it so it can make the pollen it absorbs reishi particles around Ayane.  The pollen upon the blade releases every time to moves the blade.  Once airborn the pollen turns into freely loose petals, though pollen can fall off the blade it so quickly regenerating one would never know if there is no pollen left on the blade.

If you look upon her left arm you see a gauntlet when dealing with gauntlet one would aspect them to be defensively set up for use.  Ayane's gauntlet is not used for that reason, her gauntlet cover her left arm and reaches up to her mid upper arm bypassing her elbow.  The gauntlet is black in color and has a range of motion that of her regular arm so there is no motion lost.  Unlike her sword that creates pollen her gauntlet traps pollen and manifest it within it.  Panels run up and down her arms using her spiritual energy she can open up these panels and release a massive amount of petals into the air.

Aвιℓιty
Ayane's ability is consistently tied into the pollen her blade is producing weather it be the pollen on the blade itself or the newly constructed petals that form when the pollen is released.  The pollen, in and of itself, is what causes the hallucinations.  Direct blood infusion of the pollen will cause the target to start to see hallucinations.  The hallucinations will quickly work up to the point of causing pain to the target, since the pollen is similar in to chemical structure to it has the ability to relay messages in the brain throughout the blood causing pain to the target.

As well as being to use her pollen to cause hallucinations, she can control the pollen that has gone air born.  Once going air born the pollen losses it toxic hallucination ability and turns into petals.  Using her and the reishi around her she control the petals as well make petals.  Using this she can bend the will of the petals and cause them to flow around her.  

The pollen can enter the blood stream simply being cut by Ayane's blade or entering through the bondage tech.  A papers cut size cut is enough to introduce the pollen into the blood stream.


Pollen Properties
Chemically wise

The pollen is similar in molecular structure of that of LSD.  Giving the pollen a drug based property, the drug is normally used to help create  hallucinations and visions, it is also addictive.  Ayane's body is normally once transformed covered it this and spawns it out continuously, as a incubator the pollen itself doesn't effect her at all.

The pollen blocks serotonin from the brain like LSD. Serotonin, a neurotransmitter, is in charge of regulating mood, muscle contraction, and other cognitive functions. The reason why the pollen blocks serotonin is because of their structural similarity, the pollen is mistaken to be serotonin and is then sent to the synaptic cleft instead of serotonin. And like many other hallucinogenics, the pollen has a substituted indole ring in its molecular structure, which contributes to its hallucinogenic effects. There are many perceptual changes altering the cognitive and visual sensory systems, as well as changed in the sense of time, body-image, and ego.

The pollen like LSD is a somewhat stable organic molecule, like other molecules with similar structures.The main factors to be concerned with are moisture due to chemical reactions in the presence of moisture, oxygen, light, and temperature.  So to weaken the bond of the drug based pollen one would need to use a water based move to wash away the pollen hallucinate.

The pollen is weaker then what LSD is normally as LSD is usually in a liquid based form as the pollen is in a powder based form making it air born.  So using water would basically wash away the pollen's effectiveness.  But like LSD once taking orally it dissolves right into the blood stream and once in the blood stream will then works way into the person brain.

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It should be noted Ayane's main powers are illusions, therefore even if someone is not affected by the pollen, they are still subjected to Ayane's tricks.  As mentioned before it just makes it more potent.   Every spell Ayane uses can be broken but one would need a certain level in Reiastu Skill to be able to break through it even a Master Level may have difficulty breaking some of Ayane's stronger skills.


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Tech Sidenote :  Some Techs will have multiple duration's listed this is due to the person facing the technique, and what level Reiatsu mastery they are.  Listed with each technique there is a listed level Reiatsu mastery one would need to break out of the illusion, this isn't a auto they are not effected by the move since they are at that level it just means they can be able to break it at that level if they concentrate.  If the move is one a average Reiatsu mastery level and they are a master mastery level yes they can easily break out it.  But if the move is master mastery level and so are they it still is hard to break out of it.  But if the person is that of average mastery level and try to break a move that is of a master mastery level they are very unlikely to be able to break out of the illusion.

Naмє : Rose Mist Cero
Dєscrιpтιon : Opening her gauntlet Ayane and send out a blast of white petals at her opponent causing temporary blindness, this petals will come before hand and shortly afterwords she shot a cero out from her same hand.  Shortly meaning two seconds later.  The petals that are sent out travel at a faster speed then the cero meaning the opponent will get by the petals before the cero.  
Prєparaтιon Tιмє : 1 post
Duraтιon : Instant
Cooldoωn : 2 posts


Naмє : Splinter
Dєscrιpтιon : Taking her sword Ayane stabs the ground or in some cases the air underneath her feet.  Doing this she releases the pollen within her sword unlike usual channeling her spiritual energy and reishi towards the tip a blast of white light shots out.  Then white wooden shards shaped like spears the start bursting out of the ground / air.  The spears are that of the same thickness of that of a iron pipe.  The spears will continue to sprout out covering a total area of 30 feet around Ayane in all directions.  The spears would continue to grow out of previous spears for a extended time creating a appearance that of a dense thorn bush.  This spears are intended to not only create a difficult movable field but as well as possibly impaling upon who are within it.  Each spike can grow to the length of five feet weather it is horizontally, diagonally, etc.
Prєparaтιon Tιмє : 1
Duraтιon : Once created it stays there it doesn't disappear after a certain amount of time.  But the spears stop growing after 3 posts.
Cooldoωn : 10 posts starting after 3 post duration.


Naмє : Blossoming Slash
Dєscrιpтιon : Using speed and strength Ayane slashes the air in front of her sending a shockwave like air force to the direction of her intended target.  The pollen will loosen along her blade which would make it fall off and it would then travel along with the slash in the air she made.  The pollen would then become petals before reaching the target.  The amount of pollen that would travel with the slash would be a staggering 100,000 particles which in turn would make that many petals.  Once the slash reaches target the force behind it would equal that of what the blades original strength would be if it really hit.
Prєparaтιon Tιмє : 1 post
Duraтιon : 0 though the petals would stay there as they have a infinite duration.
Cooldoωn : 4 posts


Naмє : Budding Rose
Dєscrιpтιon : Stabbing the ground with her sword the pollen injects itself into the ground keeping her sword in the ground the pollen condenses and forms giant petals that wrap around herself multiple times creating what would look like a giant budding rose blossom.  This rose bud acts like a shield, blocking off moves that would be equal or less then the power of a level 80 kido spell.
Prєparaтιon Tιмє : N/A
Duraтιon : 2 posts
Cooldoωn : 5 posts


Naмє : Bondage
Dєscrιpтιon : Twirling her sword into a circle three times, Ayane's blade take a very different look.  The sash attached her sword changes into vines with thorns the vines are white in color.  Unlike other techniques pollen is not used to create this technique but is instead channeled through the vines and congregating at the tips of the thorns.  This spinning creates 7 different vines where the ribboned sash was, these vines would go after the target in attempts to ensnare them.  If the vines were to wrap around the target the thorns would pierce through the targets skin injecting the LSD based pollen into the targets blood stream.

The vines can reach up to 30 feet in length once they are cut they stop growing.
Prєparaтιon Tιмє : N/A
Duraтιon : 4 posts unless the vines are slashed down beforehand then the sash comes back.
Cooldoωn : 5 posts


Naмє : Solidify
Dєscrιpтιon : This is a simple extension of her natural ability using the her reishi as well as the reishi around her she can solidify her petals into a solid mass.  This technique can be used in a offensive and defensive way.  She could use the petals and create a wall of them, she could use the petals it form a solid cube and drop it on her target.  The uses of this technique can only be rivaled with Ayane's imagination.
Prєparaтιon Tιмє : N/A
Duraтιon : Instant
Cooldoωn : 2 posts

Naмє : Petal Halo
Dєscrιpтιon : Zapping the pollen out currently in her blade Ayane can channel the pollen into her system causing no damage to herself. The pollen runs into and stops into her left arm. The pollen as it travels through her body starts to make Ayane's body radiate a pale pink color, once the pollen reaches her left arm, she will spin around as her left arm is extended outward as she spins around the pollen will escape out her arm almost like it was sword. Unlike the the sword the pollen doesn't turn into petals instantly as make contact with the air. Using her spiritual energy the pollen does not move a inch from the area it is released at as she spins the pollen is pushed with force the force of her spinning once she collects a certain amount she releases the pollen she is holding around her causing the pressure and force to send the pollen outwards at great speeds and force. Doing this also makes the pollen instantly turned into petals, pushing back anything with a mile radius of her.
Prєparaтιon Tιмє : 1 post
Duraтιon : Instant
Cooldoωn : 7 posts


Naмє : Bloody Perspiration  
Dєscrιpтιon : Flowers start to bloom onto the body of the target, this move is illusion based meaning pollen has to have been transmitted into the blood at some point.  Once the flowers start to form they start rooting themselves under the skin of the opponent causing the target great deal of pain almost the same pain of getting a tooth ripped out without a numbing agent.  As the flower continues to grow large blood starts to pour out from underneath the base of the flower in great volumes causing the target to panic.
Reiatsu Level Needed to Break Spell: Average
Prєparaтιon Tιмє : N/A
Duraтιon :
Master - 2 posts
Expert - 2 posts
Average - 4 posts
Beginner - 4 posts
Untrained - 7 posts
Cooldoωn : 3 posts
Triggering Effect : Numbing of Fingers


Naмє : Black Cavity
Dєscrιpтιon : A black light starts to emit then what slowly emerges out of the light is a rib cage holding a heart within it.  This move can't be used on hollows as they have no speak able hearts.  Once the ribs and heart bloom outwards the ribs start to break apart, with each break the target would feel as if they their bones are being broken.  Once the ribs are gone Ayane would take the illusion created heart and squeezes it this action would send the target into great unbearable pain almost as if Ayane was really squeezing their heart in her hands.
Reiatsu Level Needed to Break Spell: Expert
Prєparaтιon Tιмє : N/A
Duraтιon :
Master - 3 posts
Expert - 4 posts
Average - 5 posts
Beginner - 6 posts
Untrained - 6 posts
Cooldoωn : 6 posts
Trigger Effect : Blurry Vision


Naмє : Blooming in Death
Dєscrιpтιon : This technique can instantly take effect the second the pollen gets within the blood.  The spot where the pollen was injected would start to look as if the flesh around it is melting away, the pain level of this would be slow but more painful then any of her other illusion techniques.  The flesh would appear to continuous melt away in the eyes of the target, this tech not only causes great pain but also implants emotions of fear and panic.  As more flesh melts away flowers would appear to start growing out of the rotten flesh.
Reiatsu Level Needed to Break Spell: Master
Prєparaтιon Tιмє : N/A
Duraтιon :
Master - 4 posts
Expert - 5 posts
Average - 5 posts
Beginner - 6 posts
Untrained - 7 posts
Cooldoωn : 10 posts
Trigger Effect : Numbing Feeling in Arms and Legs

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PostSubject: Re: oנo dє ℓa ғℓor (DONE)   Sat Apr 19, 2014 9:35 am

Before I even look over this, I am gonna need you to increase that font size. Between the color, and the size, reading it hurts my eyes.
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PostSubject: Re: oנo dє ℓa ғℓor (DONE)   Sat Apr 19, 2014 12:03 pm

Resized it up I hope that is better.

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PostSubject: Re: oנo dє ℓa ғℓor (DONE)   Mon Apr 21, 2014 11:33 pm

Sorry added a another tech before my tech pack purchase was confirmed.

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PostSubject: Re: oנo dє ℓa ғℓor (DONE)   Tue Apr 22, 2014 4:15 pm

Ayane wrote:

The flower eye patch isn't a permanent fixture to her general appearance of her Resurreccion this eye patch is a little something that is used to suppress her normal spiritual pressure to that of 20% of its original state. This is to send her opponents into a false sense of security. Besides suppressing her spiritual pressure it also locks 15% of her initial spiritual energy making sure she has a spiritual energy in case she over does it, giving herself a little back up. This flower patch can be removed during a battle it only takes one post to do but when removing it she cannot use any techniques nor cero's during this post.

Her sword though looking completely normal to the general eye is more complex then one would think. The sword is a incubator of sorts that will generate pollen within, to feed it so it can make the pollen it absorbs reishi particles around Ayane. The pollen upon the blade releases every time to moves the blade. Once airborn the pollen turns into freely loose petals, though pollen can fall off the blade it so quickly regenerating one would never know if there is no pollen left on the blade.

If you look upon her left arm you see a gauntlet when dealing with gauntlet one would aspect them to be defensively set up for use. Ayane's gauntlet is not used for that reason, her gauntlet cover her left arm and reaches up to her mid upper arm bypassing her elbow. The gauntlet is black in color and has a range of motion that of her regular arm so there is no motion lost. Unlike her sword that creates pollen her gauntlet traps pollen and manifest it within it. Panels run up and down her arms using her spiritual energy she can open up these panels and release a massive amount of petals into the air.

That eyepatch is a no.

Ayane wrote:
Pollen Properties
Chemically wise

The pollen is similar in molecular structure of that of LSD. Giving the pollen a drug based property, the drug is normally used to help create hallucinations and visions, it is also addictive. Ayane's body is normally once transformed covered it this and spawns it out continuously, as a incubator the pollen itself doesn't effect her at all. Once inhaled the drugs addictive properties starts slowly increase making the person want to get closer to Ayane not knowing they want to absorb more of the drug based pollen.

The pollen blocks serotonin from the brain like LSD. Serotonin, a neurotransmitter, is in charge of regulating mood, muscle contraction, and other cognitive functions. The reason why the pollen blocks serotonin is because of their structural similarity, the pollen is mistaken to be serotonin and is then sent to the synaptic cleft instead of serotonin. And like many other hallucinogenics, the pollen has a substituted indole ring in its molecular structure, which contributes to its hallucinogenic effects. There are many perceptual changes altering the cognitive and visual sensory systems, as well as changed in the sense of time, body-image, and ego.

The pollen like LSD is a somewhat stable organic molecule, like other molecules with similar structures.The main factors to be concerned with are moisture due to chemical reactions in the presence of moisture, oxygen, light, and temperature. So to weaken the bond of the drug based pollen one would need to use a water based move to wash away the pollen hallucinate.

The pollen is weaker then what LSD is normally as LSD is usually in a liquid based form as the pollen is in a powder based form making it air born. So using water would basically wash away the pollen's effectiveness. But like LSD once taking orally it dissolves right into the blood stream and once in the blood stream will then works way into the person brain.

~~~

It should be noted Ayane's main powers are illusions, therefore even if someone is not affected by the pollen, they are still subjected to Ayane's tricks. As mentioned before it just makes it more potent. Every spell Ayane uses can be broken but one would need a certain level in Reiastu Skill to be able to break through it even a Master Level may have difficulty breaking some of Ayane's stronger skills.

Scrap this bit as well. The fact that the pollen basically substitutes a drug makes it way too obnoxious, since, as you said, the affected parties are going to just walk up to Ayane and ask for more. That's a no. It crosses over into godmodding via player control. The pollen will simply act as a primer for the illusions and nothing more. They go to the brain, and rest there. The end.

Ayane wrote:
Naмє : Rose Mist Cero
Dєscrιpтιon : Opening her gauntlet Ayane and send out a blast of white petals at her opponent causing temporary blindness, this petals will come before hand and shortly afterwords she shot a cero out from her same hand. Shortly meaning two seconds later. The petals that are sent out travel at a faster speed then the cero meaning the opponent will get by the petals before the cero. This cero does not count towards the normal cero count.
Prєparaтιon Tιмє : N/A
Duraтιon : Instant
Cooldoωn : 2 posts

It will follow the rules of Cero. Including prep time and counting towards CD rate.

Ayane wrote:
Naмє : Splinter
Dєscrιpтιon : Taking her sword Ayane stabs the ground or in some cases the air underneath her feet. Doing this she releases the pollen within her sword unlike usual channeling her spiritual energy and reishi towards the tip a blast of white light shots out. Then white wooden shards shaped like spears the start bursting out of the ground / air. The spears are that of the same thickness of that of a iron pipe. The spears will continue to sprout out covering a total area of 30 feet around Ayane in all directions. The spears would continue to grow out of previous spears for a extended time creating a appearance that of a dense thorn bush. This spears are intended to not only create a difficult movable field but as well as possibly impaling upon who are within it.
Prєparaтιon Tιмє : 1
Duraтιon : Once created it stays there it doesn't disappear after a certain amount of time. But the spears stop growing after 3 posts.
Cooldoωn : 10 posts starting after 3 post duration.

Need measurements on this. How long are these spikes?

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Naмє : Blossoming Slash
Dєscrιpтιon : Using speed and strength Ayane slashes the air in front of her sending a shockwave like air force to the direction of her intended target. The pollen will loosen along her blade which would make it fall off and it would then travel along with the slash in the air she made. The pollen would then become petals before reaching the target. The amount of pollen that would travel with the slash would be a staggering 100,000 particles which in turn would make that many petals. Once the slash reaches target the force behind it would equal that of what the blades original strength would be if it really hit.
Prєparaтιon Tιмє : N/A
Duraтιon : 0 though the petals would stay there as they have a infinite duration.
Cooldoωn : 4 posts

So this is concussive force here? For an attack like this, there will need to be a 1 post prep time. Also...how does one unit of pollen equate to one petal?

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Naмє : Petal Booster
Dєscrιpтιon : Point her gauntlet in any direction she will open up the panels fully which creates a over whelming amount of petals being released at great pressure and force using this she can change the directions the are sent out and creates a booster pack of them. Using this skill she can travel great speeds in seconds.

1 st her speed would be that of the level of master, 2 nd post speed of a Expert, and 3 rd post average. The speed weakens the longer it runs. With this skill she could match someone with HSM in master level rather easily for a short time.
Prєparaтιon Tιмє : N/A
Duraтιon : 3 posts
Cooldoωn : 6 posts

This is not allowed as it voids mastery levels and augmentations.


As a side note why does the pollen turn into petals? That isn't listed anywhere as a power or as a power.

As for your illusions. ALL of them are lacking information relating to how they are triggered. You cannot just hit someone with an illusion. I need to see something there that states how you initiate the illusion.
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PostSubject: Re: oנo dє ℓa ғℓor (DONE)   Tue Apr 29, 2014 10:40 pm

Vai'el wrote:
That eyepatch is a no.
Alright removed it.

Vai'el wrote:
Scrap this bit as well. The fact that the pollen basically substitutes a drug makes it way too obnoxious, since, as you said, the affected parties are going to just walk up to Ayane and ask for more. That's a no. It crosses over into godmodding via player control. The pollen will simply act as a primer for the illusions and nothing more. They go to the brain, and rest there. The end.
I removed the one part but I substituted the fact that the pollen primer to the pollen is a drug.  I like this concept and I am sorry but I will not remove the section in the regards to chemistry wise since I was asked by another mod to put it in originally.

Vai'el wrote:
It will follow the rules of Cero. Including prep time and counting towards CD rate.
Fixed it.

Vai'el wrote:
Need measurements on this. How long are these spikes?
Added.

Vai'el wrote:
So this is concussive force here? For an attack like this, there will need to be a 1 post prep time. Also...how does one unit of pollen equate to one petal?
That is correct so I added a 1 post prep like u said.

Vai'el wrote:
This is not allowed as it voids mastery levels and augmentations.
Understandable so I replaced it with a different tech idea.

Vai'el wrote:
As a side note why does the pollen turn into petals? That isn't listed anywhere as a power or as a power.
Firstly I added it in to the power and why you ask cause air born hallucinating pollen seemed a little OP in my opinion so I made it that only the pollen mainly on the blade is poisonous.  

Vai'el wrote:
As for your illusions. ALL of them are lacking information relating to how they are triggered. You cannot just hit someone with an illusion. I need to see something there that states how you initiate the illusion.
I assume you mean like a pre warning like giving the opponent a slight advanced warning a illusion is coming if so I add that in.

With all that editing I think its done I hope your pleased.

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