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PostSubject: Kinzoku (no) Tamashi [Finished]   Thu Apr 03, 2014 11:03 am


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G E N E R A L  I N F O R M A T I O N

Name: 金属の魂 (Kinzoku no Tamashi ~ Soul of Metal) [金属魂 - Kinzoku Tamashi ~ Metal Soul]

Family: Metal

M A N E F E S T A T I O N

Inner World:


The majority of Yukari's inner world seems similar to space, with two planets in it; this could be considered a representation of the reaches of her Reiatsu, and how massive it is and can be; as it is known, space is constantly expanding and never-ending. As expected, the majority of her inner world has a blue-tinged hue to it, however, as it is apparent, purple flows through it slightly. Hinted within her history, a seal was placed on her Reiatsu upon entering Soul Society. The person who sealed it, the Head of the noble Osamerukami Family, possessed a purplish hue as the colour of his very own Reiatsu. Thus, it would be safe to assume that his reiatsu, though diminished within her as the seal did, would leave a lingering presence within her.

Appearance:


Yukari's Zanpakuto Spirit differs greatly from most other Shinigami. Though a fearful attribute to some, Yukari has embraced the uniqueness of it. Its body, starting at the top, consisted of a rather large head. The eye sockets remain wide, within lying equally large eyes. The nose of the beast seems to be similar to that of a bird, and the ears一well, the closest thing one can deduce to be ears on Kinzoku are the two sharp extensions that protrude from the top of his skull.

Connected the head and torso are actually two different things: the first being the neck, obviously. Its neck is thin compared to the size of the head and torso, however it would seem quite stable, muscular even. Connecting the base of the back of Kinzoku's skull is some sort of organ that ends at the top of his back, directly before its neck.

Following downwards, its torso seems similar to one of human origin, similarly with the arms, which look toned and muscular, despite their thin nature. His hands, however, also seem to lack human structure. The palm and back of the palm seem similar to humans, but the phalanges number three, and their tips end in a spherical shape.

Kinzoku's skin tone is just as odd as the rest of him, being a pale purple, while some other parts of his skin are a deeper shade. Similar to his eyes, the crotch and what would seem to be a tail are a vibrant purple, right next to his thick thighs. His legs follow through in similar fashion to a kangaroo, ending with two thick extensions which might be considered toes. His height would seem to match Yukari, and his weight一well, it's not quite definite or measurable.

Personality: Kinzoku's personality shares similarities with Yukari, but there are several points different about him. Primarily, what Kinzoku and Yukari both share personality wise is "respect". When someone commits or preforms something respectable, Kinzoku will recognize it and treat them with respect. What differs from Kinzoku and Yukari in this situation is the fact that Kinzoku will not grant someone respect and be polite with them as a simple formality; one must earn the right to have Kinzoku be polite towards them.

S E A L E D  S T A T E

Appearance:


Aside from being a black-coated katana and being made entirely of metal, including the hilt, guard and all that jazz, the guard of the hilt is the only quality that differs from the norm. Said guard forms around the base of the blade without making contact, and a glow in similar shade to her reiatsu is present below the actual guard itself.

Type: Single Katana

*camouflage: Most marvel at how Yukari puts away her Zanpakuto. Somehow, she simply slips the entirety of the sword into her sleeve, and it fails to impair her movements. Quite the camouflage, indeed ⊙▂⊙

S H I K A I

release phrase:  "Reveal thyself and respect my wishes, Kinzoku no Tamashi!" ---Fake Release Phrase: Reveal thyself, Kinzoku Tamashi!"

Appearance: In the fake release, nothing differs in appearance from the sealed state. With the real release, the blade liquefies and seeps into her large sleeves. The only way to destroy the blade and force it back into a sealed state is to successfully stab her in the mid-section, where it stays.

Ability:  The shikai allows Yukari to produce metal from her spiritual energy, with the shikai as the medium. In essence, metal will grow from the body of the shikai, and from there it may successfully be controlled, even without contact. So long as the initial piece of metal created was from her shikai, the metal can freely be controlled and expanded while retaining density, with the created metal as a new medium. Because the shikai's ability drains her reiryoku, she can use a maximum of 60 techniques before being forced into a sealed state.

The fake shikai is very similar, in that the shikai serves as a medium. It does essentially everything that the actual shikia is capable of doing; the main difference being that all techniques are halved in duration (if the duration is available), and if there is no extended duration, then the cooldown is doubled.

Techs: 3/7

Name: Iron Maiden
Description:Same as the Reverse Iron Maiden, aside from two things. The spikes shoot inward, stabbing at anyone within. The purpose of the iron Maiden is to encase the target with the same capabilities of the Reverse Iron Maiden, however, it essentially prevents a HSM technique, due to the lack of space. Furthermore, it is extremely hard to penetrate from within, as the basis of one's strength (the ground) is cutoff from the person, as the coffin also goes under their feet. Thus, the difficulty to escape the coffin is further increased. In addition, the spikes offer little movement, even hold limbs in place by piercing them. The spikes are capable of piercing a tank, and at it's height of density and sharpness, is capable of ravaging a bomb-bunker entirely (5 post prep).
Preparation Time: The preparation time varies. The ability can be finalized in half-a-post, but at most it could withstand the ramming of a tank at about 50mph. However, the quicker the process, the more reiatsu it takes, dropping the "10 times within 30 posts" to "5 times within 20 posts". At its maximum potential, it may withstand an entire building thrown at it, however the preparation time may take 7 posts.
Duration: 5 posts max | manually ceased
Cooldown: Duration x2

Name:Reverse Iron Maiden
Description:Essentially the same thing as the aforementioned technique, "Iron Maiden", except for two attributes. One, the spikes shoot outward, rather than inside the coffin. Two, this is a defensive technique, meant to protect the person inside the coffin. The sheer size of the coffin is only out-shined by the density per-inch and thickness. The coffin grows to nearly 10ft, and the walls are nearly half a foot thick. The density of the metal would lead some to believe the metal to be made from pressurized titanium. Using this technique in abundance would cause fatigue (10 times within 30 posts).
Preparation Time: Depends: the preparation time varies. The ability can be finalized in half-a-post, but at most it could withstand the ramming of a tank at about 50mph, as well as being able to pierce said tank. However, the quicker the process, the more reiatsu it takes, dropping the "10 times within 30 posts" to "5 times within 20 posts". At its maximum potential, it may withstand an entire building thrown at it, however the preparation time may take 7 posts.
Duration: 5 posts max | it can be manually ceased before the total duration
Cooldown: x2 per post

Name: Firearm
Description: Yukari literally creates a firearm of any kind, using her spiritual energy as a replacement for gunpowder. The possibilities varies, and are limited only by Yukari's imagination and understanding of their mechanics. Kido may be fired from the firearms.
Preparation Time: 1 post every 5 guns
Duration: N/A
Cooldown: 1 post between each post when guns are created.

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B A N K A I

Appearance:  The bankai itself doesn't have its own discernable shape, similarly to her Shikai. Rather, it stays at a liquefied state underneath her armor. Technically speaking, one can still break her Bankai, but due to its malleable form and ease of placement, it'd be quite the task to perform. When she releases in Bankai, however, assorted constructs appear, aside from the changes that affect Yukari directly.

Before its release, Yukari is required to elevate to a certain height, due a solid pillar with unfathomable density and metal appearing under her, with its own height appearing to be exceedingly high. The height rivals some buildings that maintain a five-story height, and its width exceeds some entire buildings (2400 square yards).

Character Change:  With Yukari's Bankai comes a transformation of her clothes. Replacing the fabrics that used to be there is a set of armor that covers her chest and the majority of her limbs, leaving her hips and waist bare. Her hands are set with a pair of gauntlets, the phalanges extended with a sharp demeanor, as if they were a true grim reaper's hands. This armor replicates densities rivaling the pillar created from her bankai release, which possesses the hardness to be shot with a sharpened, cut diamond bullet and bounce it off easily.



Ability:  As opposed to requiring a medium in her shikai, Yukari is capable of directly converting her reiryoku into metal with all sorts of properties. With the massive size of her spiritual energy, the sheer mass of the metal she could produce would rival an entire city's total surface mass. Because using the Bankai's ability drains her reiryoku, Yukari can perform her techniques a maximum of 40 times, before being forced into Shikai. If she was forced into Shikai from a Bankai state, she can perform her techniques a maximum of 20 times. Since the Bankai releases a major amount of reiryoku, it is possible for Yukari to use 59 techniques in her shikai, then go bankai and retain the 40-tech limit. Yukari can perform her shikai techniques in bankai, and these techniques count as 1/2 to the 40-tech limit

Techs: 1/5

Name:金属霊 (Kinzoku Rei ~ Metal Spirit)
Description: A form of armour is crafted directly from Yukari's Reiatsu.



The armor is then controlled directly by the Zanpakuto Spirit. The Zanpakuto spirit can manipulate already existent metal (generally metal created from Yukari's bankai release) just as well as Yukari can, but it cannot convert her Reiryoku directly into metal, nor can it increase the mass of the metals). The best way to end this technique forcibly is through complete destruction of the armor. The armor cannot repair itself either. Other than that, incapacitating the source (Yukari) would work just as well. The range of the Spirit's control is up to 50 yards in all directions (radius). Kinzoku's usage of techniques counts to Yukari's overall 40-tech limit. Kinzoku can only be retained so long as Yukari stays in Bankai
Preparation Time: Within a post, but not instant. Requires a sort of incantation: "Kinzoku, Awaken!"
Duration: N/A (theoretically speaking, if her Reiatsu can hold out it can last the whole thread, so will this technique)
Cooldown: Once per thread, ergo no cooldown.

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PostSubject: Re: Kinzoku (no) Tamashi [Finished]   Mon Apr 14, 2014 3:32 pm

finished with the Zanpakuto



Finally! It took me a couple weeks, and to be honest those weeks only had half an hour or so of work put into this. I procrastinated so much, and a lot of the times I really just didn't feel like making it; rather, I wanted to make and write as other characters. I'm finally getting some muse back, and some of that muse went into working on Yukari's Zanpakuto. So there! I can finally say it! I'm DONE. Bumpin' this up and waiting for a grading. One can only hope it goes straight through without any adjustments needing to be made~

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PostSubject: Re: Kinzoku (no) Tamashi [Finished]   Sat Apr 19, 2014 11:01 am

Yukari wrote:
Name: Firearm
Description: Yukari literally creates a firearm of any kind, using her spiritual energy as a replacement for gunpowder. The possibilities varies, and are limited only by Yukari's imagination and understanding of their mechanics.
Preparation Time: 1 post every 5 guns
Duration: N/A
Cooldown: 1 post between each post when guns are created.

Can you shoot kido through these? 

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Ability:  As opposed to requiring a medium in her shikai, Yukari is capable of directly converting her reiryoku into metal with all sorts of properties. With the massive size of her spiritual energy, the sheer mass of the metal she could produce would rival an entire city's total surface mass.

You realize she's effectively killing herself, correct? Weakening her own abilities, physical parameters, and, by extension, the power of her techniques by sacrificing her reiryoku...

Yukari wrote:

The armor is then controlled directly by the Zanpakuto Spirit. The Zanpakuto spirit can manipulate already existent metal (generally metal created from Yukari's bankai release) just as well as Yukari can, but it cannot convert her Reiryoku directly into metal, nor can it increase the mass of the metals)

To what degree?

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Name: Nuke
Description: This technique literally creates an atom bomb. The process is incredibly simple, but precise. A piece of metal shoots into a small valve. This is essentially how an actual atomic bomb is produced. The pressure ignites and shoots a neutron into a nucleus, splitting the nucleus and creating a chain reaction, consistently shooting neutrons into the nuclei of atoms. It takes 1 post to prepare the substance, as the metal she must create must possess properties similar to plutonium or U-235, which are rarities in itself. This technique, albeit powerful, is seldom used as the sheer power of it is indiscriminate, and it is highly likely that she will be caught in the blast. Few things will survive, including herself. It is essentially unavoidable, even with high speed movements, lest someone already be at least half a kilometre away from the epicenter. The actual technique is visible from any position in the whole thread. This technique's preparation is practically impossible to notice, as the actual preparation needed to produce it is subtle and small, taking little time and space.
Preparation Time: 1 post
Duration: 5 posts (including side-effects and after-effects)
Cooldown: 2 times per thread, 10 posts between each use (at least)

Nope. This is an insta-kill technique, and it's not going to fly...This is basically saying unless they are not on the battle field, they die. Noticing this isn't the problem, it's the fact that you're manipulating things on an atomic scale, AND doing it in one post, AND you can do it twice (even though survival is basically not happening), AND obliterating everything around you. Overall this is just a no. The only way this would be remotely acceptable is if it wasn't an atomic bomb.
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PostSubject: Re: Kinzoku (no) Tamashi [Finished]   Sat Apr 19, 2014 9:32 pm

Firearm- Yes

Bankai Ability- Luckily, she has insane levels of Reiryoku, which keeps her able to fight for the majority of the time. I added in it that she can use techniques a maximum of 40 times before forcefully going into Shikai. In shikai, she has a maximum of 60 times for the techniques, and if she was forced from Bankai into Shikai, a maximum of 20 times.

Armor- 50 yard radius

Nuke- Taken out

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PostSubject: Re: Kinzoku (no) Tamashi [Finished]   Tue Apr 22, 2014 4:44 pm

Okay uhm...firstly we have to address this reiryoku business.

60 techniques is WAY too much. The amount of metal she would produce (when you have bankai techs), would ruin her a lot sooner than 60 techniques. Between techniques, abilities, and the fight in and of itself, there's no way she's reaching 60 techniques in Bankai beforehand. Not to mention that's a RIDICULOUS expectation. If you use more than 20 techs in bankai you're probably losing anyway. Not to mention that by converting your own reiryoku into techniques, you're still shooting yourself in the foot since you're also going to be slower, weaker, and less durable...If your future Bankai techs (aside from the armor since that's the only one you have) are anything like the Shikai ones, you're creations are not going to be tiny little things that don't make a dent in your reiryoku. These are going to be decent sized dents in your energy storage.

And speaking of the armor, I meant how can she manipulate it. To what degree can the metal be manipulated, since that will say whether or not you need additional techs here. Also, I'd rather it only control metal that was created by Yukari.
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