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PostSubject: Kokujin Katsurou <Finished>   Mon Feb 24, 2014 2:55 am

~~~Vizard~~~

Name:Kokujin Katsurou

Alias: The Tenken

Age:1934

Visual Age: 29

Gender:Male

Reiatsu Color: Golden with traces of silver lining

Ex-Division:Third Division/Sanbantai

Affiliation: The Kyoshinja

Rank: Shingikai Arasoi

--------------------Persona--------------------

Appearance: Katsurou’s body appears to have been forged from the very brimstone of hells floor and given life. Standing at six feet and three inches tall, Katsurou’s height is very symbolic of his stature. At the peak of his condition,Katsurou weighed in at some hundred and ninety pounds. His form and figure resembles that of an athletes, with neatly trimmed muscle lining much of his body; yet not so muscular that it might impede his movement.

In cascading lockes, the Head Kokujin's stark black hair scales down the lightly garbed form of his body. His immense wealth and status as a noble shows greatly here, as the amount of care put into ones hair could only be afforded by someone of his station. Each strand possesses a brilliant sheen that reflects all forms of light, both natural and artificial in nature, and is but one of the countless reasons as to why he's commonly sought after by members of the fairer sex.

When it comes to clothing, Katsurou's tastes are decidedly old fashioned. He dons the garb of a wealthy male noble; a dark purple kimono and like colored andon bakama with his white haori to cap it all off. Yet, unlike others within his family whom commonly adorn their hair with kensaikan, Katsurou opts to wrap a thin strip of black silk around his forehead; who's twin tails whip in the wind behind him like fox tails. To top if all off, Katsurou doesn't carry his Zanpakutou in the traditional position;resting helplessly by his side. Instead they reside upon the small of his back, crossing horizontally across his thin waist, ready to be drawn at the briefest of moments.



Personality:
~Secretly Observant~
Katsurou has a knack for knowing things without people informing him, and often notices the slight changes in ones body language or tone. A talent he largely believes came from his time studying beneath a former Head Interrogator of the Rukobantai.
Predominant Personality Trait
Many claim to be observant. More openly admit to it. Unlike the common breed,Katsurou hides his observant nature by appearing to be unconcerned or interested in the things around him - and thus frequently fools his peers when he speaks. He's able to pick up the subtle, and often unknown to the person, changes in a person under various circumstances. Katsurou has a love hate relationship with this particular trait. He's often thankful for his keen sense of observation as its allowed him to survive his years spent as a Captain of the Sanbantai and his few short months as a Vaizard. His hate comes from the fact that he hates knowing others, as it often goes to show he'll never have anything in common with them.

~ Secretly Soft~
The bad boy routine isn't this years new thing. In fact, since the dawn of time there's always been someone who has a tough exterior while being a soft, chewy cookie on the inside. Katsurou is one such man.
Predominant Personality Trait
How many people do we know like this? Outwardly cold, and uncaring while truly having a warm, soft heart? The bad boy routine is something Katsurou pulls off with an A - able to fool those around him into thinking he could care less about any and everything around him; often resulting in pushing away others.This trait is a defensive one for Katsurou, symbolizing not only his inability to connect to those around him, but is unwillingness of it. The reason behind this is rather simple; Katsurou, like many others, is afraid of opening up to someone and getting hurt. He finds the probability of this happening in his current state to be nil, while the alternative to be highly probable; a chance he isn't willing to take.

~Secretly Musical~
There are some that can open up a door to the outside world and see anything worthy singing about. Others often find themselves incapable of resisting the urge to burst into song at the slightest hint of emotion. Katsurou counts himself among such men.
Predominant Personality Trait
Somewhere inside Katsurou resides a secret Artist. One that beats at the cage door to be freed, if even for a moment. On the occasion Katsurou allows himself to be so, and will set himself upon whatever his muse desires. Painting, sketching and sculpting are among his preferred methods of relieving his 'itch' - some have even been recognized in Art Weekly. This trait is applied to his daily life in a plethora of ways, but none more frequently that his desire to show case his art; his primary way of connecting with people. He relies on his artsy side to strike conversation with others.

~Openly Wise~
Many confuse Wisdom with Intelligence. More confuse wisdom with age. Katsurou is the walking definition of the word.
Predominant Personality Trait
While not as old as many others of his kind, Katsurou shows an uncannily high degree of wisdom in nearly everything he does. When he speaks he comes off as someone speaking from experience. When he sets himself to a task, he sets himself upon it like a veteran of said task. Should anyone point out his wisdom, Katsurou would quickly deny the trait and instead call it the logical thing to do or say.

~Self-Reliant~
The ability to rely on no one else but yourself. Few have this trait, despite the mass that swear by it.
Predominant Personality Trait
Probably the one thing about himself that Katsurou holds in a high regard is his ability to do nearly everything himself. From his early years as a child to now, Katsurou has always saw to it that he's taken care of; regardless of the methods required. Many find the trait in itself admirable, and some even seek to gain his degree of self-sufficiency.


Secondary and Tertiary Positive Traits
Calm~ Few things are able to shake Katsurou's unwavering calm waters. The have been times when many have confused his calm nature as him being cold. The truth couldn't be further from the opposite. Katsurou feels things just as hard as others, sometimes harder. However the male is a firm believer in 'There is a time and place for everything.'
Goofy~ A side rarely seen by anyone other than Desirae, and rightly so. Katsurou believes that by exposing his lighter side he'd only succeed in furthering the boundary between he and the rest of the world.
Sweet~ There is a side to Katsurou that seeks to please others; one seen only by a single individual no longer amongst the living nor spiritual. This sweet, kind, compassionate characteristic stems from Katsurou's hidden inclination to see everyone smile at least once.
Driven/Ambitious~ It's not often that something manages to stir Katsurou from his typical 'I'm just going to lay here' state, but there are a select from circumstances that have brought out the mans more ambitious side. When this happens nothing can even slow the man down as he seeks to complete his goal.

Feels Unworthy Without Just Cause
Many in our world have a feeling of inadequacy. Often, this feeling of worthlessness can be justified. Katsurou however hasn't any such reason.
Predominant Personality Trait
Easily a trait of Katsurou's that is ever present. He goes through his days with an eternal feeling of inadequacy. He firmly believes that his life has not, and will not ever amount to anything. This feeling of self-worth, or lack there of rather, is one of the key reasons behind why Katsurou is unable to connect and relate to others.

Self-Sacrificing
Hero's are willing to sacrifice themselves for their loved ones, and the innocent.
Predominant Personality Trait
Not to be confused with the Hero's version of this trait, Katsurou takes the meaning of Sacrifice to an all new level. In instances during his past, Katsurou has been known to put himself within harms way for little to no reason; and never because he thinks its the right thing to do. Instead, Katsurou is willing to sacrifice himself for another reason; he holds his life with no regard, and believes himself unworthy of living.

Jealousy
Jealousy is invariably a symptom of neurotic insecurity.
Predominant Personality Trait
Jealousy. A trait that Katsurou despises. In truth, this trait might be better categorized as Envious. Katsurou is often jealous of the things others have that he doesn't; he's yet to resort to taking it away from them. Something that Katsurou wants that other people seem to find, if even a little, often is love. His time spent in the Human World, free to travel anywhere he pleases, has caused him to cross the paths of many people and in turn countless lovers. Somewhere deep within the confinements of his heart, which he claims to either be black as coal or non-existent, Katsurou secretly wishes to find love of his own.

Pride
Anger is the enemy of non-violence and pride is a monster that swallows it.
Predominant Personality Trait
Katsurou is a man that often finds himself beneath many things. His pride comes from his high amount of confidence in his ability to confront and fight others; strongly believing that in a brawl he cannot lose. Of course, through out his career as a Shinigami and Head Noble, Katsurou has had his ego dented finding that he is not the largest fish. Despite the lessons he's been taught on this matter, he refuses to change and may likely always retain this wretched trait.

Wrathful
Few know the difference in Wrath and Righteous Wrath.
Predominant Personality Trait
Katsurou isn't a man to anger quickly. His fuse is long and thick, often taking years to burn down. When this does happen, few have dared to stand in his way - fewer yet have braved the storm and lived to tell the tale. Katsurou can also hold a grudge for eons on end, and never misses an opportunity to exude every ounce of his wrath upon a target. It is this trait that has earned him the nickname from Desirae 'Lonely Wrath'.

Secondary and Tertiary Negative Traits

Apathetic: For the most part, Katsurou can be wholly uncaring about many things - himself, others, things going on around him. This trait show's specifically during the Invasion of Hueco Mundo, during the Blood Moon War, when he stood idly by whilst countless soldiers within his division perished at the hand of the Arrancar.
Mood Killer: Katsurou lacks the ability to maintain a set mood, and as a result has the ability to completely kill it. Whether it be from something he says to his facial expressions, Katsurou is a renowned mood killer.
Lack's Sense of Humor: Humor isn't something Katsurou fully understands. Often he's been found in a theater with Desirae, with the crowd around him erupting, while he remains silent - stuffing his face with popcorn or soda. This trait often leads others to think Katsurou is standoffish or rigid.
--------------------History--------------------

History:
The First Born:
 

Academy Life:
 

Family or Love:
 

Blood Moon War:
 

Fate Is a Cruel Mistress:
 


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PostSubject: Re: Kokujin Katsurou <Finished>   Sun Apr 06, 2014 10:16 am

Checked on him Friday. He got hit with a few unforseen things, but is still planning on doing this.
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PostSubject: Re: Kokujin Katsurou <Finished>   Mon Apr 07, 2014 11:54 pm

So. My history is incredibly rushed, but between med school and working I haven't had a lot of time to work on it. Today's probably the only day I'll have to really sit down and write enough to complete the app in one fell swoop.

As time goes on, I intend to make minor edits and add things so that the history isn't so rushed looking. Hopefully that's acceptable.
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PostSubject: Re: Kokujin Katsurou <Finished>   Thu Apr 10, 2014 1:14 am

I see two big gaps and one small one in your characters history.

1. His years as a captain. This is a very big gap of time that you have left out. Its also one of the most important for your character. Take this time to add some more depth to the guy. Its a good story as is, but without those years it just seems like somethings missing.

2. You should really go into abit more detail into why you joined the kyoshinja and how you got your rank within that organization. Simply because you have been there for not even a couple of months based on still being a shinigami during the Blue Moon War. It seems odd that Vai'el would just hand you the strongest position on his council without even so much as a question.

3. What happened between you and Desirae? Did you ever see her again? Was she there during the blue moon war? Did she die? For such an important part of your life, her involvement seems to disappear completely.
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PostSubject: Re: Kokujin Katsurou <Finished>   Thu Apr 10, 2014 2:30 am

Alrighty, I'll work on it but it'll be several weeks before I have the time required. So just bare with me.
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PostSubject: Re: Kokujin Katsurou <Finished>   Thu Apr 10, 2014 2:08 pm

No problem, just be sure to check in every now and then to let us know your still working on it.
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