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PostSubject: グレートウルフ - Ingens Lupus/Great Wolf    Tue Mar 12, 2013 1:12 pm

General information-----------------------------------------------------------------------------------

Name: グレートウルフ - Ingens Lupus/Great Wolf

Family: Wind

Manifestation-------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------

Inner World: Kujo's world is a great forest shrouded in darkness, it's only source of light is the full moon which is in constant play. Next to the shadows of the night, a slight breeze is the darknesses constant companion. Although the wind comes and goes like a common street whore, it's still the darknesses companion over and over again through the night.

Appearance: Kujo is a great wolf that's the size of a school bus, he has long black fur that he neatly keeps, his eyes are the color of glistening rubies, and his teeth are four inches long with serated edges, easily able to rip a persons limb from their body. His front and back claws can slice through terrain and foreign object like a hot knife through butter.

Personality: Kujo is easily angered and more often than not, his temperment transfers over to his human counterpart. If Kujo feels that Jeri is spoken to in the incorrect manner or looked at wrong, he'll say something about it. He does have his sulking moments, especially if she leaves him in her office. The only thing that can rightly calm him is her voice, her voice and her singing are like sweet nectar to his ears and to his soul. Kujo's sate for blood is uncontrolable and he personaly feels that the hollows are responsible for cause the rift between him and Jeri when they had almost destroyed their connection.

Soul Connection: The change that Jeruzia takes on are in her eyes, they change from her emerald green to a deep shade of red that fade into the black of her irises. Her canines elongate and sharpen, and her hair becomes wilder, her nails also sharpen and turn from a healthy natural color to a 'dirty' yellow shade, that fades to dark brown down to her cuticles.

Sealed State--------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------

Appearance: The sword has a white hilt with gold entwined around it. A full moon is engraved at the top of the sword just under the hilt. She has no camouflage for her sword, she just carries her katana in a white hilt with gold inlay.

Type: Reverse Blade Katana

Shikai-----------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------

release phrase: Lupus Venti

Appearance: Upon release the reverse blade katana turns into a long double edge sword with a gold handle and a large redish/black ruby embedded at the top of the hilt, the moon still remains engraved as the base of the blade.

Ability: Jeruxia operates with a wind based shikai, although this is certainly her specialty, she also has a small trick regarding her voice, when she absolutely needs to, her voice can be carried by the wind, this secures her attack (more to come on what her attack is). her attacks and abilities can be disapaited with either another wind, or an ice attack. If her opponent is safely grounded, than her attacks will have no affect on her intended victim.

Techs:

Name: Ripu Clawson
Description: An extended strike, three markes that shred their way through the ground they will curve at the end, so in the event that the intended tries to jump to the side to avoid the attack, they will get hit, but if it makes contact it will tear through the intended target.
Preparation Time: 3 posting rounds without sword based attacks.
Duration: 2 posting rounds
Cooldown: 2 posting rounds

Name: Ventus Nocturnas
Description: When Jeri raises her her sword and brings it down, she sends a wind tunnel at her intended victim (s) as she can take out more than just 1, but no more than 3. The wind tunnel will lift the victim up off the ground and then will slam them back into the ground. Generally doing nothing more than knocking the wind out of them.
Preparation Time: 1 posting round
Duration: 2 posting rounds
Cooldown: 3 Posting rounds



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PostSubject: Re: グレートウルフ - Ingens Lupus/Great Wolf    Sat Mar 16, 2013 4:47 pm

1.I'd go into alittle bit more detail here on your shikai ability. Its sort of confusing in its current state. For instance, what kind of wind based attacks can she preform in her shikai?

2. I don't see how nightengale factors into your blades ability other than you mention she "has a trick with her voice". Either more detail is needed here why or how its relevant or it needs to be removed.

3. Id remove the percent chance of being hit on ripu clawson. We have no way of enforcing a percent based attack so it would be irrelevant to have in a technique.
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PostSubject: Re: グレートウルフ - Ingens Lupus/Great Wolf    Fri Apr 19, 2013 3:18 pm

please make some kind of update to this weapon jurexia, I know your still here haha
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PostSubject: Re: グレートウルフ - Ingens Lupus/Great Wolf    Fri Apr 19, 2013 4:59 pm

You know nothing....*gives mysterious look* Sorry, been trying to work on this when I can. I am trying I swear. I just am needing to put more info on the detail, but other than that we should be good.
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