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Mizuko Ichikawa




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PostSubject: Selece    Sun Mar 10, 2013 10:49 pm

General information-----------------------------------------------------------------------------------

Name: Selece (no translation needed, it’s a name)

Family: Water and Ice

Manifestation-------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------

Inner World:

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Appearance:

Selece is a large, blue dragon. He stands about 10 feet tall and has a wing spand of about 20 feet. His underbelly is a cream color and he looks a bit intimidating at first. He has an alternate view he uses in which he appears to be a large, mechanical robot. He is, however, very much able to control himself The robot like Selece is about 6'5" tall. His amour is blue and silver in color and he mainly uses this version of himself when he is training with Mizuko.

Personality: Selece is the type of person who will make you work for it. Everything that Mizuko has now she has earned through hard work and concentration. He’ll accept nothing less than hard work. Otherwise he does share some of the same personality traits that Mizuko herself does.

Soul Connection: Both share their like of water and ice. They are also very loyal to those they find can be friends and is very shy around those he does not know.

Sealed State--------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------

Appearance: Looks like a normal sword like everyone carries. It's 24" in length. The blade is a duel sided blade with a blue guard and hilt. The sheath is a midnight blue and can sometimes seem as if it is flowing like water does.

Type: Katana

Shikai-----------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------
*Note that this release is only available to those who hold a D Rank.

release phrase: Rain down from the heavens and crush our enimies, Selece. Short Command: Rain Down, Selece.

Appearance:

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Mizuko's zanpakuto changes to a rapier that has a thin blade that looks to be made of water. Though it looks like water it is quite strong and can take a good hit. The sword itself can take quite a bit of damage but is not completely unbreakable. Those in a lower tier would not be able to break it while those in a higher tier would have the best chance through continued high power attacking. Those in an equal tier would have a chance, but it would mostly depend on their strength as compared to Mizuko's defense. The hilt of the sword is blue and fits her hand like it was made for her. The guard trails out on either side of the hilt and looks almost like the tails of a dragon. Also just above the hilt is a blue jewel that glows when she uses her water/ice attacks. It's almost as tall as she is, 4'7" tall, since she is smaller than most Shinigami


Ability: Mizuko's Shikai helps to increase her control water and ice and her use of her learned ability, Hatsuden.

Hatsuden

Mizuko has the ability to control water and can use the water in the air. This does use spirit energy and prolonged use does wear her out. The control of the water normally is for defence but can be used in offence as well. The use of water only lessens the damage taken, depending on type and strengh of the attack. If the attack is water based it may do no damage at all depending on what tier the attacker is. For attack, it can varry from an annoying sting (Like a spit wad hit) to a bruse depending on her mood for the most part. When she uses this attack her eyes glow a sapphire blue. This takes one post to charge before use, unless she is very angry then it can be right away. Mizuko also does not have the ability to control other water users attacks. She is able to use the water in the area to make her own attacks, just not the water from the enemy.

Techs: ( may only have up to 7 techs. please use template below.)

Name: Water Dragon

Description: She calls for energy and gathers water in the area around her index finger or her sword. If there is not much water in the area she will use her Hatsuden to create water. Once she has a sufficent amount she sends out that water towards her enemy. As it comes towards the enemy the water takes on the shape of a dragons head with the body following being the rest of the water.

Preparation Time: N/A

Duration: 1 post

Cooldown: 4 Posts

Damage Guide:

For those that are in 2 tier above it will knock the enemy down and soak them.
For those that are 1 tier above, equal tier, or 1 tier below the attack will knock the enemy down and soak them causing light scratches.
For those that are in 2 tier below the attack will knock the enemy back, knocking them down and soaking them and causing scratches and brusing.


Name: Sapphire Whirlwind

Description: Mizuko holds out her hands and begins to gather water on her index fingers. As she starts to gather the water she begins to turn around, raising hands above her head as she does. Once she has fully turned around she can send this attack in any direction she may need. Directions include but are not limited to directly in front of her, above her, and to either side. What is sent out is a sprial of water right towards the enemy, between the enemy and a friend, or at an enemies attack. Sapphire Whirlwind can knock you back into objects or push you away from Mizuko. It can also act as a type of barrier between the attacker and someone else being attacked. This attack is more defensive than offensive but can be used as an attack should the need arrise. Can't use again for 4 posts and there is no charge time.

Preparation Time: N/A

Duration: 1 Post

Cooldown: 4 Posts

Damage Guide:

For those that are in tiers above Mizuko there is a great chance that the attack will block the enemies attack and, if used offensively, will slightly push the enemy back, mostly getting them wet.
For those 1 tier above, equal tier, and 1 tier below, there is greater chance that the attack will block the enemies attack and, if used offensively, will push the enemy back, possibily into a building or an object, causing bruising and scratching, and get them wet.
For those that are in tiers below Mizuko there is an excelent chance that the attack will block the enemies attack and, if used offensively, will push the enemy back into a building or object, causing damage such as broken bones, bruises and scrapes, and will get them wet.


Name: Sensatsu Suishou

Description: : An attack where she draws water from the area above the enemy by raising her hand. She then freezes it into thin, needle like projectiles. She then lowers her hand the projectiles fly downward towards the enemy. At one time she can call no more than 100 of the needles. Any more and they will be thin and easy to break, causing little to no damage. The fewest number she will call upon is 25. At this many they can be as strong as a regular needle. The more she calls up, the thinner and easier to break they are.

Preparation Time: N/A

Duration: 1 Post

Cooldown: 10 Posts

Damage Guide:

For those in tiers above Mizuko, there is a greater chance than those equalt tier that the attack will miss. The attack will mostly cause light scratching and a small stinging feeling from where the needles hit.
For those 1 tier above, equal tier, and 1 tier below Mizuko there is a great chance that the attack will miss. The attack will cause medium scratching, some deep, and a stinging feeling from where the needles hit.
For those in tiers below Mizuko, there is a slim chance that the attack will miss. The attack will cause custs to different parts of the bodies, and a stinging feeling from where the needles hit.


Name: Water Bullet

Description: Mizuko uses her Hatsuden and the water in the area to gather a large sphere of water directly before her. From this she forms multiple, thick globs of water which then changes to the shape of a bullet, no more than 50 bullets at a time. She then fires them at any enemies within her radius. This attack can cause massive bruising, some cuts and scrapes, and can possibly knock a person around or out if the person is in a lower tier. For those in an equal tier the attack can cause general bruising, some scrapes, and can knock a person around a bit. For those in a lesser tier the attack can cause minor bruising, very few scrapes, and does not knock the person around. This attack will cover a 50 foot radius.

Preparation Time: N/A

Duration: 1 post

Cooldown: 2 posts

Damage Guide:

For those in tiers above Mizuko, there is a great chance that the attack will miss. The attack will mostly cause light scratching and a small stinging feeling from where the water bullets hit.
For those 1 tier above, equal tier, and 1 tier below Mizuko there is a good chance that the attack will miss. The attack will cause medium scratching, some deep, and a stinging feeling from where the water bullets hit.
For those in tiers below Mizuko, there is a slim chance that the attack will miss. The attack will cause custs to different parts of the bodies, and a stinging feeling from where the water bullets hit.


Name: Water Prism Blizzard

Description: Mizuko uses her Hatsuden to help with this attack. Mizuko closes her eyes and concentrates for a moment. When she opens them agian her eyes are glowing a sapphire blue. She then sticks her Zanpakuto into the ground and uses that as a focal point to draw a ball of water near her. Once she has a decent sized ball she sends it out towards the enemy. It covers the enemy in a bubble like prism that is hollow except for the person(s) inside. The prism is size of a giant sky scraper. Once covered by the prism a giant blizzard forms, covering the person(s) inside quickly with snow, partialy filling up the dome. Once the blizzard stops the pack of snow hardens into a block of ice, freezing the person(s) inside for the duration of the technique. If the person is of a higher tier than Mizuko they may, if caught in the dome, have the ability to break out. Mizuko can not use this attack agian at all during the remander of the battle as it uses quite a bit of her spirit energy. She also will rarely us this techniqe as it is new to her and uses most of her energy.

Preparation Time: 1 Post

Duration: 2 posts to 3 posts

Cooldown: can’t use any longer during the battle

Damage Guide:

If the person(s) is in a higer tier than Mizuko, the attack has a great chance that it will miss completely. If the attack hits, it will last for 1 post. The attack, if it hits, will cover the person up to the middle of their chest. Once it hardens into ice, if they do not break out, Mizuko slashes her sword down, breaking the ice and causing light scratches and light brusing.
If the person is in the same tier, 1 tier above or 1 tier below, the attack has a good chance that it will miss. If the attack hits, it will last for two posts. The attack, if it hits, will cover the person up to the middle of their chest. Once the snow hardens into ice, Mizuko slashes her sword down, breaking the ice and causing scratches, some cuts, and brusing.
If the person is in a lower tier, there is a slim chance that it will miss. If the attack hits it will last for 3 posts. The attack, if it hits, will cover the person up to their head. Once the snow hardens into ice, Mizuko slashes her sword down, breaking the ice and causing major scratches, cuts, and heavy brusing.


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PostSubject: Re: Selece    Sat Mar 16, 2013 4:40 pm

1. The shikai ability here is ice based while all your techniques are water based and often refer to a "Hatsuden" that doesn't exist. I think you meant to change the ability here and forgot too at some point because currently the ability doesn't match the techniques. I'd suggest changing the ability to something water-based as well as replace all the Hatsuden's with Selece since thats the name of your zan.

2. On all the damage guides on the zan I'd suggest losing the percent of hit factor. We don't currently have a system that uses percentages so adding that in would be kind of useless if you understand my meaning.
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PostSubject: Re: Selece    Sat Mar 16, 2013 10:06 pm

Percentages fixed. Hatsuden is an ability Mizuko has learned. It's a limited control of water and the ability to create a limited amount of water. It's in her history. It is limited since she's not been fully trained to use it.
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PostSubject: Re: Selece    Sun Mar 17, 2013 4:20 pm

Being in the history doesn't help me here where members will look to find what it is. Is it a sealed state ability or an extension of shikai? If sealed, I'd rather you have it as an extension to shikai to make the app flow better. Say your initial ability is water control and that you favor using it to create ice. or something along those lines.
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PostSubject: Re: Selece    Sun Mar 17, 2013 11:00 pm

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PostSubject: Re: Selece    Sun Mar 17, 2013 11:05 pm

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